Five Line Friday

Five Line Friday: The End

These five lines are from a story that will hopefully be coming out at some point around Halloween this year. I’m very excited about it!

It pulled its head up and gazed at the world through new eyes. The world existed in the drab grey of monochrome simplicity, but tinges of crimson permeated through the dreariness. Food. It knew instinctively what the red signified and within it a hunger grew, exploding from its mouth in a frightening shriek… Its mind was on the figure walking away, a pack awkwardly swung over its shoulder.

If you have any comments, I’d love to hear them!


One thought on “Five Line Friday: The End

  1. Oh wow! This is definitely my kind of reading. I’ll be watching to learn more.
    Thanks for sharing the fantastic hook!

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